I think it looks really well proportioned, and I can't see any problems with the anatomy. I really like the range of tones and strokes, like the delicate lines in the eyebrows and the blockier look of the hair. C: My only criticism would be that the eyes look a bit unfocussed. Like they aren't pointing in the same direction. The lips are really good too, they look really soft and natural. I have trouble with lips. D:
wow thanks for such a sweet and thought-out response ^_^ yeah there is something off about the eyes as others have said. and oh thank you i had a reference picture though so don't give me too much credit hehe
Very nice! The details here are well-made as well as the shadings. I have a truly bad time when trying to draw mouths, and yours is drawn very realistic, seem by the details in the lips. His fixed looking at the viewer gives life at the work as well.