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Francisco Lachowski by MafzDestruct Francisco Lachowski by MafzDestruct
my fave model :meow:
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PonderHope Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
The lip looks a tad crooked a bit, but you did a good job on everything else pretty much!
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013   Digital Artist
I think it looks really well proportioned, and I can't see any problems with the anatomy. I really like the range of tones and strokes, like the delicate lines in the eyebrows and the blockier look of the hair. C: My only criticism would be that the eyes look a bit unfocussed. Like they aren't pointing in the same direction. The lips are really good too, they look really soft and natural. I have trouble with lips. D:
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow thanks for such a sweet and thought-out response ^_^ yeah there is something off about the eyes as others have said. and oh thank you :P i had a reference picture though so don't give me too much credit :meow: hehe
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Rovanna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013   Digital Artist
Haha, I think it's important to use a reference, especially when drawing a real person. c:
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KwongBee-Arts Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this looks really awesome I don't think the photo is doing it justice but a little more shadow and contrast could really take it to the next level. excellent work over all though.
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NightmareOfReality Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
well, I actually like the shading.
though I would spend more time on his eyes, giving them more details.
anyway, great job! =D
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! there is a bit more detail in real life but i just think it didn't really show up orz... but thanks so much ^__^
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NightmareOfReality Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
you're welcome =)
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KlarthSan Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice! The details here are well-made as well as the shadings. I have a truly bad time when trying to draw mouths, and yours is drawn very realistic, seem by the details in the lips. His fixed looking at the viewer gives life at the work as well.
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aw thanks you :meow: and yes i feel like i give my drawings life ^__^
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ssensory Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013   Writer
Three slight issues: one eye is longer than the other, the lips, in size, are off (the left side is smaller than the right), and the ears appear to be slightly different shapes.

Other than that everything looks great! I can tell this took a lot of time, effort, and talent to draw and I applaud you for doing so well. I love the shading - especially the hair. You can be an amazing artist someday.
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ur right about all the asymmetry in the piece, i kindof noticed as i was doing it (well the eyes) but i'm lazy :p i didnt even notice the lips until you pointed it out! i am just going to leave it because i'd rather just remake the whole thing later. thnx for the constructive criticism nd the compliment :meow: ^___^ and haha the hair is the worst part orz i got so lazy nd suck at hair anyways
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ssensory Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   Writer
You're very welcome! I personally thought the hair was pretty good - definitely not the worst part of it. :nod: you have a lot of talent. :la:
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MafzDestruct Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow thank you i appreciate it ^__^
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ssensory Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013   Writer
You're welcome :)
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