I think it looks really well proportioned, and I can't see any problems with the anatomy. I really like the range of tones and strokes, like the delicate lines in the eyebrows and the blockier look of the hair. C: My only criticism would be that the eyes look a bit unfocussed. Like they aren't pointing in the same direction. The lips are really good too, they look really soft and natural. I have trouble with lips. D:
wow thanks for such a sweet and thought-out response ^_^ yeah there is something off about the eyes as others have said. and oh thank you i had a reference picture though so don't give me too much credit hehe
Very nice! The details here are well-made as well as the shadings. I have a truly bad time when trying to draw mouths, and yours is drawn very realistic, seem by the details in the lips. His fixed looking at the viewer gives life at the work as well.
Three slight issues: one eye is longer than the other, the lips, in size, are off (the left side is smaller than the right), and the ears appear to be slightly different shapes.
Other than that everything looks great! I can tell this took a lot of time, effort, and talent to draw and I applaud you for doing so well. I love the shading - especially the hair. You can be an amazing artist someday.
ur right about all the asymmetry in the piece, i kindof noticed as i was doing it (well the eyes) but i'm lazy i didnt even notice the lips until you pointed it out! i am just going to leave it because i'd rather just remake the whole thing later. thnx for the constructive criticism nd the compliment ^___^ and haha the hair is the worst part orz i got so lazy nd suck at hair anyways